m alone in this crowded world.....!!!!

d world seems empty
no one seems to b here.....
i wanted to b with u
but i was left alone over there....

i m in a crowded place
all there was noise....
but what has happened to me
for,,,i cudnt hear a voice....

m losing everything
everything i ever had.....
d truth is revealed
n m going mad....

d one i trusted blindly
was d one backstabbing me....
why u did this wen
i told u everything about me....

p.s. i got senti again......!!!!!




Comments

vandy said…
lovely

emotions expressed beautifully
September 22, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Dhruv.. said…
Thats very b'ful expression !
September 26, 2010 at 11:44 AM
Eksha said…
thanx dhruv....!!
September 26, 2010 at 6:42 PM
Anonymous said…
Well.. that is sad and emotional, and beautifully written. But I hope that is only a poem for you. Nothing actual.

Have a good day ahead. :)
November 12, 2010 at 1:49 PM
Eksha said…
@shazoor: well yeah it ws just a poem,,,well almost....!!
thanks....!!
November 12, 2010 at 8:34 PM
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